Having leveled criticisms at all other belief systems, here we give people the opportunity to point out what they think is wrong with EBS.
People aren't going to "chomp" on this — they need to be told that God is a physical entity, who will reward/punish them if they are good/bad. You can't just say that inanimate natural law can be personified, and expect them to worship that.
There's more to it than that — one of the essential ingredients of a religion is its support for parental transferral. We all want to think that we still have a mommy and daddy, and these were forceful authorities.
While EBS is based on science, it includes theological concepts and terminology that are not acceptable to many pantheists and humanists.