Did you read those three articles on Simcha's site that I mentioned? I thought they might have some new info to add to your theory.
I said your theory seems very plausible. In your replies to my comments, did you add anything that wasn't mentioned in your paper?*11262 If so, that's what would likely be most useful for me to notice now.
The Exodus story is interesting, but even more interesting to me would be Genesis and comparing it with the Egyptian creation myths, esp. since you have the Israelites being largely Egyptians, I think. I'm interested in those comparisons, because I think Talbott's Alien Sky video has good evidence for the ancient Saturn configuration with Venus and Mars etc.